Score: 9

"It's a shame..."

submission: The Fall Down

date: April 2, 2008

...that this movie only has 1,700 views. I just came across this when I was voting for my monthlies (you're in it), and I was surprised both by how good it is and that it hasn't been featured on the frontpage, I guess this is one of those gems that unfortunately was missed by Tom. Anyway, I like it, love the style and the song as well, and I hope you're going to make more.

Score: 10

"Great!"

submission: Webcamoose!

date: December 2, 2007

Haha, that was brilliant! It's hard mixing real-life stuff with flash, but you've nailed it pretty well. It was refreshing, the animation was really fluent and it had some good random humor in it. I like it!

Score: 10

"Incredible and inspirational"

submission: :the Composer:

date: September 20, 2007

It's hard to create something moving with Flash, you succeeded. The end gave me goose-bumps.

Score: 9

"It was about damn time..."

submission: The Tutorial Collab '06

date: October 15, 2006

...You guys submitted this :)! I still hate myself for not contributing... Anywho, as I expected (I checked the thread in the Flash Forum every once and a while) it turned out to be a great tutorial, for both newbies and the more advanced. Actually, I think it's by far the best tutorial on Newgrounds or any other Flash based tutorial I've ever seen. Nice Job!

Score: 8

"Strange..."

submission: A visit by Ragin'Brain

date: August 8, 2006

It started so peacefully, so I thought the part about the violence was just a joke. So yeah, I was surprised by the sudden 'turn' of storytelling. Anyways, I like your style, the animation was great, the atmosphere was perfect and it was nicely optimised. The music was somewhat simple but it fitted the animation rather well. Too bad it was pretty short. Overall: 8,2

Score: 9

"Somebody has been playing too much LocoRoco ^^"

submission: Prehistoric.

date: August 4, 2006

This is easily the best platformer there is on NG. The gameplay is really, really fluid and the artwork is brilliant. I like the simple and colorful style. The fonts, menus, help function, camerawork, it's all brilliant.

<3

Score: 3

"I completelt agree with Bailong..."

submission: God Bless America

date: July 13, 2006

Get your facts straight. And you're not going to tell me you're proud of the fact America bombed Japan, since that is the most inhumane thing a country has ever done. Oh, and btw, it looks like you accidently forgot to mention Vietnam, or wasn't that an accident?

Score: 4

"Way too slow..."

submission: Anime Flash Tutorial

date: July 10, 2006

Give it a next button, so we can skip the text if we want to. It was way too slow for me to watch all of it. Oh and maybe add some other songs so I don't have to listen to the one you used ^^

Score: 4

"I've seen far worse first tries."

submission: The Loaded Clip

date: July 1, 2006

Let's focus on the stuff you should improve for the next part:
- Get some voice actors. I assume you did all the voice acting in this part, it was way too fast. Make sure you slow down the voices a little next time.
- When the characters are fighting with their hands make sure you also move their legs, otherwise it'll look strange and unnatural.
- Change the menu and credits. The shape tweened fonts look really bad, fading them in would llook better and is just as easy.
- Speed up the frame rate. It looks really shocky and bumpy right now. It might give you a little extra work because everything is fbf, but it'll be worth it.
- Use onion skinning to make the body movements look more natural.
- Fix all the errors in the subtitles...
That's about it.

Good luck with the sequel.
2,5/5

Score: 8

"Wow..."

submission: rtil's trad animation '06

date: May 2, 2006

You can tell a lot of work went in those animations, they were surprisingly smooth. The background music was also very nice. You should try to make a fbf-flash when you have the time...