Excellent visual style, a nice silly plot and great voice acting. For a first part of a series it feels very solid and polished. Good effort and I hope to see more soon.
Hopefully you will :)
It's a shame...
...that this movie only has 1,700 views. I just came across this when I was voting for my monthlies (you're in it), and I was surprised both by how good it is and that it hasn't been featured on the frontpage, I guess this is one of those gems that unfortunately was missed by Tom. Anyway, I like it, love the style and the song as well, and I hope you're going to make more.
Wow, this is the kind of review that makes all the troubles of animating worth the while!
Thanks a lot! :)
Haha, that was brilliant! It's hard mixing real-life stuff with flash, but you've nailed it pretty well. It was refreshing, the animation was really fluent and it had some good random humor in it. I like it!
Well random IS my middle name ^^
Thanks for reviewing dude <3
Incredible and inspirational
It's hard to create something moving with Flash, you succeeded. The end gave me goose-bumps.
It started so peacefully, so I thought the part about the violence was just a joke. So yeah, I was surprised by the sudden 'turn' of storytelling. Anyways, I like your style, the animation was great, the atmosphere was perfect and it was nicely optimised. The music was somewhat simple but it fitted the animation rather well. Too bad it was pretty short. Overall: 8,2
I completelt agree with Bailong...
Get your facts straight. And you're not going to tell me you're proud of the fact America bombed Japan, since that is the most inhumane thing a country has ever done. Oh, and btw, it looks like you accidently forgot to mention Vietnam, or wasn't that an accident?
Vietnam has nothing to do with my point... additionally... I am VERY proud of America for bombing Japan... it brought the war to swift decisive end... and it avoided the project casualties of over half a million American soldiers that would have been lost in an invasion of Japan... and in war it is us or them... please read a book... then kill yourself with it.
Way too slow...
Give it a next button, so we can skip the text if we want to. It was way too slow for me to watch all of it. Oh and maybe add some other songs so I don't have to listen to the one you used ^^
I've seen far worse first tries.
Let's focus on the stuff you should improve for the next part:
- Get some voice actors. I assume you did all the voice acting in this part, it was way too fast. Make sure you slow down the voices a little next time.
- When the characters are fighting with their hands make sure you also move their legs, otherwise it'll look strange and unnatural.
- Change the menu and credits. The shape tweened fonts look really bad, fading them in would llook better and is just as easy.
- Speed up the frame rate. It looks really shocky and bumpy right now. It might give you a little extra work because everything is fbf, but it'll be worth it.
- Use onion skinning to make the body movements look more natural.
- Fix all the errors in the subtitles...
That's about it.
Good luck with the sequel.
You can tell a lot of work went in those animations, they were surprisingly smooth. The background music was also very nice. You should try to make a fbf-flash when you have the time...
That was crazy. Great song and graphs which fitted the music really well. Can you please convert this to a movie file so I can put it on my psp? ^.^
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