Xeptic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The W Force - Episode 1]

Great Stuff!

Excellent visual style, a nice silly plot and great voice acting. For a first part of a series it feels very solid and polished. Good effort and I hope to see more soon.

ImpendingRiot responds:

Hopefully you will :)

[Webcamoose!]

Great!

Haha, that was brilliant! It's hard mixing real-life stuff with flash, but you've nailed it pretty well. It was refreshing, the animation was really fluent and it had some good random humor in it. I like it!

BritishMoose responds:

Well random IS my middle name ^^

Thanks for reviewing dude <3

[:the Composer:]

Incredible and inspirational

It's hard to create something moving with Flash, you succeeded. The end gave me goose-bumps.

[A visit by Ragin'Brain]

Strange...

It started so peacefully, so I thought the part about the violence was just a joke. So yeah, I was surprised by the sudden 'turn' of storytelling. Anyways, I like your style, the animation was great, the atmosphere was perfect and it was nicely optimised. The music was somewhat simple but it fitted the animation rather well. Too bad it was pretty short. Overall: 8,2

[Anime Flash Tutorial]

Way too slow...

Give it a next button, so we can skip the text if we want to. It was way too slow for me to watch all of it. Oh and maybe add some other songs so I don't have to listen to the one you used ^^

[The Loaded Clip]

I've seen far worse first tries.

Let's focus on the stuff you should improve for the next part:
- Get some voice actors. I assume you did all the voice acting in this part, it was way too fast. Make sure you slow down the voices a little next time.
- When the characters are fighting with their hands make sure you also move their legs, otherwise it'll look strange and unnatural.
- Change the menu and credits. The shape tweened fonts look really bad, fading them in would llook better and is just as easy.
- Speed up the frame rate. It looks really shocky and bumpy right now. It might give you a little extra work because everything is fbf, but it'll be worth it.
- Use onion skinning to make the body movements look more natural.
- Fix all the errors in the subtitles...
That's about it.

Good luck with the sequel.
2,5/5

[The Ultimate Showdown]

omg...

That was crazy. Great song and graphs which fitted the music really well. Can you please convert this to a movie file so I can put it on my psp? ^.^
Make moreeeee!